This is the first story I wrote when I came to Ohaeawai School. I think I did well because I used: When,who,where and what. I also said how I was feeling. My teacher gave me these goals for next time: Use people's names and use adjectives to describe them.
Term 1 2016 Personal Recount Sample Quintin
Going to Paihia
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On the weekend my dad, uncle and I went to Paihia to get mussels and pippies. We stayed for two hours. It
was fun. I splashed my uncle and he got a fright.It was time to go home.
I was so worn out that I fell asleep in the car on the way home.
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